i dont have the bitterness left in me to fight this war
i also dont have the energy to care
so i will lie down and let you stomp and scream
as i roll all over into another apathetic dream
my submission will help you feel in control
and it’ll also give me room to breathe

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  1. Killa I dont reckon it needs any understanding. Only Mazza here knows what she’s saying but you interpret it the way you want. Thats the beauty of poetry and art. Slap your on interpretation on it based on what it makes you feel 🙂

  2. nice little para…chris martin (cold play ) will love to have it …. poety is somting u can feel … you can expalin the poetry to someone but u cant give them that feeling ….

  3. might i be so bold as to suggest some [minor] modifications in emphasis and intonation to what appears to be coming from the heart
    of the affair (keeps it ups):

    i do not have the bitterness left in me
    to fight this war

    nor the energy to care, no more

    so i will lie down
    and let you stomp
    and scream

    as i roll [all] over into another apathetic dream


    my submission will help you feel as if you’re in control

    and give me room to breathe

    [gustaakhi ma’af]

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