Literary Theatre (Part 3)

Ok, number 1 from this post.

I have multiple endings for each bullet point.

  1. Beneath the wrinkled bed sheet lay the rest of my dreams limp and cold much like his love for me.
  2. Beneath the wrinkled bed sheet under the comfort of my disorganised clutter, I stayed hidden, silent. It didn’t take long before the thunderous knock came at my door forcing me to quit my cherished weekend ritual. I hesitated out from under the chaos and sat up momentarily. The footsteps were lingering in the corridor.

    Oh for crying out loud! I fumed and pushed out of bed.

Please critique.

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